"Living at War opens your eyes to the treacherous lives of the unwilling civilians living in Iraq while the war destroys their homes. This character based drama keeps you on the edge of your seats"
This drama series concentrates on a different character each week, much like Skins, as they go about different aspects of daily life in an extremely dangerous setting. HIghly dramatic and suspense ridden, you will be fearful for the characters and kept on the edge.
First off "Living at War" is a GREAT title. I really like the idea, could be very powerful - but.. the pitch doesn't sell it. It reads more like a review, than a pitch. Think of what is the key drama to this series and use that to hook me in, in 25 words. Have another go, as I think the idea deserves it.
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