Pre-Production: Script second draft

I initially had difficulty cutting down the longer scenes of the script after Simon gave me notes on my first draft. However, when I came back to it I think I managed to cut out the unnecessary dialogue and make it more snappy. Some scenes could probably do with being a bit shorter but I couldn't find a way to get it down any further and Dylan and Casey couldn't see what to remove either, we have all read the book though so we might be biased to what should stay.